Part 1 - Clause Confusion |
Part 2 - Disagreeable Grammar |
Part 3 - Unclear Meaning |
There are several one-word modifiers that commonly cause problems: almost, even, just, hardly, merely, nearly, only, simply, etc.
Incorrect: The shop owner under the blinds caught the customers peeking at the new merchandise.
Incorrect: The first customer rushed past the owner beating the other customers to the best deals.
Incorrect: The customer almost spent $200.
Solution: Move the modifier closer to the word/phrase it modifies
Correct: The shop owner caught the customers peeking under the blinds at the new merchandise .
Correct: Rushing past the owner, the first customer beat the other customers to the best deals.
Correct: The customer spent almost $200.
A dangling modifier is a word or phrase that modifies another word or phrase that has not been clearly stated. These errors often occur at the beginnings and ends of sentences. They are often found in phrases with verbs ending in ing or beginning with to followed by the verb.
Incorrect: The attorney's objection was made hoping to block the evidence.
Incorrect: Banging his gavel, the objection was overruled.
Incorrect: Flying into the air, the judge knocked his notes off the bench.
Solution: Place the subject of the modification phrase as the subject of the independent clause or place the subject of the action within the dangling phrase.
Correct: The attorney made his objection, hoping to block the evidence.
Correct: Banging his gavel, the judge overruled the objection.
Correct: The judge's notes flew into the air as the judge knocked them off the bench.
Example: The votes were counted by hand by election officials.
Passive voice is NOT grammatically wrong. However, it is only appropriate if the focus is on the receiver or results of the action rather than the role of the actor. If the focus should be on the actor, the actor should be the subject of the sentence.
Passive: The results of the election were not tallied correctly by the county.
Active: The county did not tally the results of the election correctly.
Solution: Decide whether the emphasis should be on the actor or the receiver. If the actor is more important, write in active voice. If the receiver is more important, write in passive voice.
Incorrect: Mistakes in the tally were made by the county.(Passive)
Correct: The county made mistakes in the tally. (Active)
Written By: George Knox © 2017
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